a draft what supposed to be a fan fiction comic (or doujin to be precise) for Elfen Lied

supposedly Lucy meet another guy instead of Kouta, where she murdered his (older) twin brother and sent him berserk. here's the catch, they both psychic with the exceptional he is the stronger one

like the original story, he forgot everything, til another incident took place, and this time, he will make sure she is dead!